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Story So Far (SSF):

When complications hit Mistypack, Saharah (the alpha) decided to take instant action against the invading uprights, shortage of food and overall bad territory. They then put some distance between that territory (around 200 miles worth) even with the new pups of the alphas and betas. Long story short, an enemy wolf was recruited, then turned against them and became alpha by force. Terror and bad times followed his reign and a battle is currently raging.

Kuni and Kari's story can be followed at the Fresh Kill link below the chat box on the right sidebar.

An uprising started by Sako surged through the pack and they revolted against the guards. The battle is raging and wolves from both sides are falling. Who will triumph? Add your attacks to the battle by commenting in the newest post!

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Keep watch for posts informing followers of a possible Sequel blog to Mistypack.


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RULES:

No killing another player unless it is agreed by them and agreed by me

No special powers

No special things like wings or weird colors that are not "Wolf-Like"

No Killing the Alpha and then becoming Alpha on your own will
No being mates with the Alpha and having her/him or have you have pups by the Alpha unless it is agreed by The Alpha.

No Making yourself Beta without permission from the Alpha.

No detailed Mating/Birthing as it can be disgusting to other role-players.

No detailed eating/killing another animal--as it can be disgusting to other role-players.
(You may have it fairly detailed but give a warning in parenthisis e.g: [Warning: Fight scene may be gruesome to some RP's. Proceed with caution] or something.)


No prophacies from Starpack unless given permission from the Alpha/Owner and you are a Healer. Very few exceptions.

If one or more RP's have a planned out plot going on feel free to join but ask before changing the plot slightly.

NO playing out a full plot or changing a plot in (your own) one comment or post!


Be conciderate! No god-mods, please! =)

Start up your own plots if you like, but if it involves the entire pack email or alert the owner/ask for permission before going ahead with a full pack involved plot.

HAVE FUN! ;)

Saturday, March 26, 2011

"They're coming!!"

http://www.packtalho.blogspot.com/ <-----please read first. **I've added a Playlist on here with wild, fighting music. Perfect. we're ready...**
And please be realistic. There is no way all the wolves will survive *both packs* or not suffer any wounds. That's the hard part in writing....having to kill of your favorite charecter. But sometimes it's just gotta happen..................

Kazrah heard the howls and whirled around and leapt onto the cliff.
"THEY'RE COMING! TALHO PACK IS COMING!!!! GET READY!" she bellowed at the pack. She whirled back around; ready to face the evil that was coming. As if sensing the evil surrounding the place, the clouds came together and hid the sun from view. Minutes ticked by and Kazrah felt the tention rising withen the pack. her heart began to pound and her body tensed up. her muscles began to flex and she crouched a little lower. Saharah had come back with  yeti who was badly hurt. He was safe in a den and being guarded as his wounds were tended. Saharah slapped some herbs on her own and was bravely standing on Kazrah's right side. Kazrah was nervous. ((((You guys, I am seriously HONESTLY sweating in rl. My stomach feels all tensed because of what I'm typing. I'm all tense waiting for the battle to begin. I'm not sure what's going to happen when I'm writing the fight but here goes. yeah, I rlly get into my stories. Quick reminder, no killing Gazmuld, or my wolves from Talho pack. You guys can kill your wolves if you want. You may make maiming wounds but not fatal wounds unless it's your wolf. good  luck! *You can hurt sobodies wolf, just not seriously*)))) Kazrah looked to her right to spot Shenzi also standing beside her. She heard paws comign closer and howls bellowing out accross the forest. She began to breath heavily. Drops of rain fell beside her. Suddenly the skys opened up and rain poured down on them. There was a battle cry and Lightning lit up the sky while Thunder boomed out along with the battle crys as Gazmuld leapt over the low shrubbery.
"GRAAAAH!!!!!" Kazrah and Gazmuld were instantly locked in battle as more wolves poured in. She bit as hard as she could; but this was no random wolf. Gazmuld was a trained wolf who was murderous and blood-hungry. She rolled over on her back and kicked upwards with expert and direct aim and hit Gazmuld square in the stomach. He rolled away from her and she was instantly pinned down by another wolf. She whirled around, her sharp teeth punishing whatever came in contact with them. She kicked, bit, smashed and faught with whatever she had. Several wolves lay dead in front of her and she prayed that it was none of her own. Suddenly she was side by side with Flare. Flare was expertly fighting and brought down a wolf quickly. More wolves still poured in through the Camp Enterance. Kazrah began to pant in rythem with her blows. Flare had been wrestled out of the way and was battling another wolf while Kazrah was faced with Shimmer.
"So your the Alpha! I thought for sure you'd be beautiful, majestic, a expert figh-" Shimmers words were blocked as Saharah slammed into her and knocked her to the ground. There was a loud crunch as Shimmer grabbed Saharah's leg and cracked it in to. Kazrah felt the roar of battle inside her and she glanced around. The camp was swimming with wolves. Blood covered all of them--some of each side and some of their own blood was everywhere. Wolves were taken down and trampled underfoot. Some instantly leapt to their feet, some couldn't get up for a moment, some were never to move again. Saharah was lost under the pack of wolves and Kazrah was beaten down by another wolf. She bit hard into his soft stomach and felt blood pour out as he fell to the ground and she jumped over him and ran to the next wolf to battle. It was total chaos everywhere. Blaze was battling a large wolf at least twice his size. Both had huge gashes all over their bodies. Mist was fighting off several wolves at once as Flare came over to help. Most of Misty Pack had teamed up and were doing well but there were many that Kazrah couldn't see.
"DON'T STOP FIGHTING! FIGHT FOR MISTY PACK! FIGHT FOR THE PUPS! FIGHT FOR YOUR LIVES!! FIGHT FOR YOUR FUTURE!!" bellowed Kazrah. The words were whipped away by the noise of the thunderstorm and the battle but still some heard it and faught harder.

95 comments:

Brookstep/Zebra/Shenzi said...

Shenzi was pushed to the ground by three large males. Deep wounds crisscrossed her pelt, and little of her gray coloring could be seen through her blood. One of her eyes was swollen shut, and the top half of one of her ears lay in ribbons.
Trajj stood over Orange, one of her hing legs dragging uselessly. Orange lay on the ground, his breathing fast and shallow. Trajj gaurded her brother from oncomming attacks.
Talia lay on the ground after an attack, and shut her eyes as she breathed her last.
Leezor fought though and strong, covered in wounds and an entire ear shreaded.

Zoraz/Dog Trainer In Training said...

Flare suddenly stumbled against a tree, panting and heaving. Her entire side of her face was shredded and her ears were bleeding. There wasn't a spot on her body that wasn't red with blood. She had an insane grin on her face as she turned again to face her oponent.
"You'll never beat me," she said, her smile staying as she stared back at her oponent. the other wolf halted momentarily before slashing out and hiting Flare on the sid eof the head. She force of the blow caused her to spin around and fly backwards before sliding along the slimy mud. Rain poured down her face, making the blood drip off in large drops of scarlet making her look in horrible shape. Sahrah was at her friend's side instantly.
"Flare..!" she whispered. Although the noise was so loud that Flare couldn't hear her, she knew what her friend had said. She smiled a faint smile before her head flopped to one side and Saharah was shoved to one side and attacked.

Brookstep/Zebra/Shenzi said...

Shenxi abandoned the wolves she was fighting, and fought her way over to try to find her packmates through the battle. She stumbled over Talia's lifeless body, and howled over the noise, a memoral for her dead packmate and hopefully a message to Kazrah. She stood stumbled next to Saharah. By this time, Shenz was fighting blindly with one eye swollen shut and missing for all she knew, and the other blocked by blood. She did manage a quick glance at Saharah, and hoped that her fellow beta would reconize her and attack.

♦♥Alado/Shade♥♦ said...

Hawk grappled with Hakoda, the male was strong and fierce but Hakoda wasn't smart. Hawk's flank had scratches running along and his ear was torn but the light of fire never left his gaze.

Roku crept to Mistypack's nursery. He grabbed Jade by the scruff and growled at Jazz to follow. "We need more wolves to recruit." He smiled sneakily.

Korra ran around the clearing helping any of her her Talho packmates.

Evening lay on the ground, she had been fighting with Kya but the she-wolf was much stronger than her. She closed her eyes as the pain grew.

☮Alina☯Bailey said...

Dekota ran to Shenzi after carying Yeti to the den "Shenzi, you are very badly hurt, come with me" he said killing off the wolf she was fighting it a time.

Alison told Felicia, who was in the den with yeti at the time, to get some herbs. When she came back Alison toke the leaves off of Yeti's wounds, put the herbs on and put some new leaves on over them.

Brookstep/Zebra/Shenzi said...

(YOU CANNOT MAKE SHENZI DO ANYTHING. YOU CANNOY MAKE HIM MAGICALLY KILL THE WOLF SHE WAS FIGHTING)

☮Alina☯Bailey said...

(no, no, no it was dekota who killed the wolf.)

Brookstep/Zebra/Shenzi said...

(IDC, JUST DONT INTERACT WITH SHENZI)

☮Alina☯Bailey said...

(oh wait, i read what you said wrong, here i'll give you some more detail.)

Dekota bit the wolf, riping its neck apart ferochusly(idk how to spell it).

Brookstep/Zebra/Shenzi said...

(Thats not the point. Just dont talk, fight with, interact with, or anything with Shenzi. Us messing up my plans!)

☮Alina☯Bailey said...

(You have been unusually mean latly shenzi)

Zoraz/Dog Trainer In Training said...

Saharah whirled around on three legs to screech at Alison-
"WHAT ARE YOU DOING??!?!?!?!? THERE'S NO TIME FOR THAT! GET OUT HERE AND FI-" she was cut off as four wolves slammed into her and she yelped in pain as she heard a few more cracks. Suddenly there was silence. All wolf heads turned to see Rasho and Gazmuld circling each other slowly.
"You coward. You cowardly wolf...always having some other wolf do your bidding. This time it's you and me. YOU AND ME, UNDERSTAND!? GET YOUR IDIOTIC OTHER WOLVES OUTTA HERE BEFORE I KILL THEM MYSELF!!!" Rasho bellowed at the top of his lungs. Other wolves were whimpering in pain but not fear. Blood covered the ground and many wolves had been killed. Gazmuld growled at Rasho but called off his wolves and they slowly backed of and made a large circle.
"You've had your fun, Gazmuld! LOOK HOW MANY WOLVES HAVE DIED!!! YOUR TIME IS OVER!!!" Rasho was acting the same way he had been when he was attacking Dekota at the Gathering. Gazmuld glowered back at him.
"You deserted my pack. You have a dark side and you don't even know how to control it. It's in your blood. It would be better for everyone if you died. Come back and join my pack and do my bidding or else, DIE HERE!" he snarled as he leapt at Rasho and grabbed at his throat.

Brookstep/Zebra/Shenzi said...

Shenzi, now freed from her attackers, fell the the ground with a thud.

Trajj limped to the group, wanting to stop Gazmuld but knowing she never could.

☮Alina☯Bailey said...

Alison, Meli, and Felicia jumped on three of the four wolves attacking Saharah and riped thier necks apart wildly. "Oh and let your love die?"(Was that a bit rude? tell me if it was) Alison barked to Saharah.

Bailey gaurded the den in which Yeti was in, riping the neck of any wolf who came near.

Zoraz/Dog Trainer In Training said...

(((((*****THE BIG FANALE!!!!!*****)))))
Rasho was ready--he rolled over and jammed up hard with his paws- catchign Gazmuld directly in the chest and knocking the breath out of him. Suddenly they were a rolling mass of fur and blood flying in every direction. Gazmuld suddenly flung Rasho away from him and he landed a ways away with a yelp.

Brookstep/Zebra/Shenzi said...

Leezor growled, ready to countinue the fight when nessesary.

♦♥Alado/Shade♥♦ said...

Frost stumbled and ran into a wolf, she yelped until she realized it was one of her packmates. Her one eyes was swollen and the blood welled into the other. She couldn't see. Her white pelt was stained with her enemies and her own blood.

Jade whimpered as Roku carried her. "Leave me alone!" She cried.

Jazz watched his sister helplessly from where he walked beside Roku, the wolf would kill them both if he tried anything.

☮Alina☯Bailey said...

Meli jumped on Roku and bit his neck, badly injuring him.

♦♥Alado/Shade♥♦ said...

Jade's body lay limp on the ground.

Jazz howled and nudged his sister's body.

Roku fell. He growled but didn't move. He'd been beaten.

River said...

(HOW COME I NEVER GET ANY ACTION?! i go to Monteray Bay Aqarium and i miss a fight! NO FAIR!)

☮Alina☯Bailey said...

(River, you can still comment, the fight is not over!)

☮Alina☯Bailey said...

(You got to go to the Monteray Bay Aqarium! i think i've only been there as a baby, maybe)

River said...

(ya and i have been there like TWENTY times LITTERALY! we have membership there so we can bring you next time maybe.)

a blur of black and Soma had knocked down NightThunder. he was about to kill him when suddenly he was wrentched off as a beautiful nearly golden she-wolf stood there his ankle in her jaw. she trotted off dragging him like a fawn. after a while she let him go. he ran not scared but to trick. she raced after him and planted a large paw on his back. she barked amused "Deer-brain! i was only getting you off so you dont get shredded. not my problem you are deer-brained!" Soma found himself staring dreamily into her eyes until she slapped him with her tail.

♫§♥~Chile Panda the Great~♥§♫ said...

Dreamer raced into battle."I hate battles!" She mumbled."I'm just to light!" As if to answer her comment, a wolf slammed into her and flung her in the air. When she landed, she heard a sickening crunch in her paw as a wolf bit into it. Pain shot up her leg and she howled in fury. She swung her hind leg around and scratched deeply into the wolves' side.

Haku was interlocked with another male. He couldn't really tell who was winning, until the tom started to push him over. Luckily, Haku was very heavy. He clamped his mouth on the wolves' tail, and it howled. It jumped up while underneath Haku, causing him to let go.

Zoraz/Dog Trainer In Training said...

Rasho felt the ground shuddering beneath him with the weight of all the other wolves running, fighting and hitting the ground with a large force. He picked himself up and cricled Gazmuld, growling. Suddenly his heart started to pound and his eyes narrowed. Blood roared in his ears, as well as pouring form his wounds. He crouched and got ready. This wolf had no rule over him or his pack. He had no right to push wolves around, tell them what to do and then attack random packs. Rasho laid his ears flart against his head and leapt forwards with a roar of rage.
"GRAAAAHHHHHH!!!!" he flung himself at Gazmuld, who had formerly been looking bored until Rasho made another attack. He widened his eyes in surprise and backed away but he had waited to long. Rasho had entered his Black Side and there was no stopping him now. **Explained Later** Gazmuld had paused for a moment as Rasho leapt backwards; baiting Gazmuld and tempting him to retaliate. Years of fighting told the Alpha not to but in Rasho's case this was different. Once he was in his Black Side he could not stop fighting until he died or was snapped out of it (Something very hard to do unless your close to him-) Gazmuld leapt after him with a snarl.
"Okay, Rasho. You've chosen your path. On your head be you and your Pack Mates deaths!" they rolled over and over, both snarling and roarung at the top of their lungs. Gazmuld struggled under the young wolf's firm grip and suddenly he was on top. Instantly Rasho gave a twitch of his teeth and claws and Gazmuld fell to his paws and Rahso was again on top. The both struggled until Gazmuld made a mistake. The last mistake he would ever make. When he regained the top position for a moment, he shoved his head down to bite Rasho in the throat; forgetting that Rasho was in his Black Side. Rasho took instantanious advantage of this and grabbed his oponents throat instead. He ripped and pulled and bit down hard. Gazmuld had noted his mistake and tried to reverse it but it was too late. He was pulled to the ground while Rasho continued his fierce attack. Suddenly it was over. Gazmuld lay on the ground, sides heaving as he lay dieing. Gazmuld's whole pack froze at the sight of their leader. Gazmuld had a nasty grin on his face.
"Hah...incolent wolf....they'll find out, Rasho.......you've exposed your power......nobody wants you! Go away from Misty Pack with your burden! They'll eventually kill you thems- themselves...................nobody wants a wolf like you....R-......Rash....-Rasho.............................." there was silence exept for the heavy breathing of Rasho as he watched his oponent breath his last. Blood dripped down his muzzle; making his snarl look even more terrifying as he glared down at the wolf who had taken so much away from him. Suddenly he sat, his head lowered as he gasped for breath. Tears streamed down his face; regardless o how much he tried to stop them. He hung his head low to the ground as memories flooded back.....Gazmuld killing his sister and forcing him to watch......Rasho being a younger wolf-not a pup, but not an adult and being beaten by Gazmuld's pack......................seeing his brother, Trojan.......his sister, Frejja.........all being forced to live under terrible conditions..............and Gazmuld........................was Rasho's Father................................

♦♥Alado/Shade♥♦ said...

(Jade died btw)

Jazz's eyes grew cold. When he was older he would avenge his sisters death but not now, he was far to small.

River said...

two pups hid in a bush while their mother faught with a brown she-wolf(Melanie). suddenly their mother killed the brown she-wolf... only for two more she-wolves(Rasha and River) and a male(Tajo)to leap on her and nearly shred her. they leaped away showing their mothers dead body. the smaller one wept and the larger one growled. suddenly a large black wolf(their father) attacked the three wolves in vengence.

Melanie locked into battle with another brown she-wolf. it went back and forth from who was pinned then Melanie was pinned and her neck was bit. her eye glazed over and she died.(i am irl sobbing cause Melanie was my favorite and thats my name!)

River, Rasha and Tajo where on the white female in a flash tearing at her in need for revenge of their dead mother. Tajo pinned her by the shoulders and Rasha and River reared up and smashed her neck killing her. suddenly a large black wolf attacked them and suddenly departed leaving River on the brink of death, Rasha in a coma and Tajo dead.

♫§♥~Chile Panda the Great~♥§♫ said...

Dreamer kicked the wolf off of her, then saw Rasho."Are you okay?" She murmured gently in his ear, ignoring the blood and what happening. Clearly if he was crying, he wasn't savage at all. Just protective.

Zoraz/Dog Trainer In Training said...

Rasho turned his face away from her and made a non-commital gesture. He coughed in an effort to stifle a cry of anguish and then whirled around and ran. Where he was going, he had no idea. But he knew he had to get out of there somehow. Anywhere but there. Anywhere...
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Gazmuld's pack still stood rigid as they stared in disbelieve at their dead leader. Shimmer finaly spoke.
"Ace.....your the Alpha..!"

Brookstep/Zebra/Shenzi said...

(Its funny, on teh bus home from school five minutes ago before seeing this, I relized Ace would be alpha! Lol!)

Ace stepped forward boldly, and the crowds cleared around him. "Wolves of Tal-" He was inturupted by a peircing howl across the camp.

Wolves of Miraclepack (Dont worry, I didnt forget them!) gathered around the broken form of a grey wolf. They wolf appeared to have died of an espessiall bad neck wound. The wolf had dark gray fur and clouded eyes that had once been a striking amber color. Tell steped foward, pointed his head tarweds the sky and howled a call of mourning for this dead packmate. The rest of the wolves backed up, and Tell layed his head on the body of this wolf. The body was now visible to the bystanders. Sprit, the first alpha or Miraclepack, lay dead.

Zoraz/Dog Trainer In Training said...

(AA! SPIRIT!?!?!? NOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And lolz about Ace.)
All of Misty Pack was wondering around; most with teary eyes as they observed who had died and who was severly injured or maimed. Suddenly there were anguished and panic stricken cries as the dead were recognized.
"Mist!"
"Melanie!"
"Jade!!" howls of sadness filled the air and any attempt to speak by Talho's new Alpha were instantly drowned out. (lolz. I'm scrolling the page to see who I should do..I rlly don't want to...I rlly don't want to............I RLLLLLLY don't want to!!.....) Suddenly one cry rose from the rest in a deafening sad howl
"KAZRAHHHHH!!!!! KAZRAH IS DEAD!!!!!!!" there was a shocked silence as many wolves froze. Then whispering and howls broek out.
"Kazrah?! Dead?? No! It can't be!!"
"I just saw her!"
"Talho Pack will pay!"
"Rasho should never have come here!"
"He led the wolves here!"
"Look how many have died!!"
"Kazrah...KAZRAH!!! WHERE IS RASHO??!!!"
"WHERE IS MISTY!!? THEY WILL PAY WITH TALHO PACK!!"
"Misty has died...."
"...................."
".............."
"...........What about Rasho?"
"He left."
"He ran into the forest after killing Gazmuld."
"He killed him?"
"He killed Gazmuld!?"
"Yes. Don't take vengance on him. He has suffered enough.....after all..........Gazmuld was his father........................" Saharah's statement was greeted with shock and horror. Howls still echoed through the air for the lost wolves.
"Kazzzrraaaaaaaaaahhhhhh!!!!!!!"........

Brookstep/Zebra/Shenzi said...

(Saharahs the new alpha, right? That means that hypetheticaly, Yeti would be alpha male correct?)

Shenzi had regained concoisness just in time to hear the first cry of Kazrah's death and of Spirits, as well as Gazmuld. She joined the howl for her fallen leader, while all of Miraclepack howled for Spirit.

Ace snarled. At least some of the wolves had died, he thought to himself. Still, this had to stop.

Brookstep/Zebra/Shenzi said...

(Ok, I just want to make the inguried of my wolves clear.
Shenzi was seriously wounded and lost an eye.
Trajj was seriouslt crippled.
Orange was killed.
Reamo didnt have anything too serious.
Leezor was left delerious
Tygris was killed
Talia was killed)

Zoraz/Dog Trainer In Training said...

((Awwww!!!!! Here's mine---
Kazrah--Killed
Saharah--Broken Leg
Flare--Almost killed but survived
Blaze--Broken Paw, lost and eye
Mist--Dead
Kira--Walks with a limp but can still keep up well and hunt quietly.
Gazmuld--DEAD
Rasho--Possible Desertion)
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Rasho stood in the Forest, heart pounding and chest heaving as he tried to stop the sobs racking his body. He had casued so many wolves to die. He hadn't seen what wolves, but he knew that Misty Pack had suffered. He decided to leave forever. He leapt to is feet and headed out through the trees as fast as he could.

Brookstep/Zebra/Shenzi said...

(Poor Yeti....He missed the entire thing....actually, edit that. He was there, and now hes a badley broken leg and a scar over his eye like Scar in Lionking)

Tell steped forward. He seemed dazed, calling attention to his breeed mixture, and the fact that he was the new Miraclepack alpha. "Miraclepack is leaving!" he called over the crowd. "We are travelling back to our old territory to deal with our losses. WIth that, Miraclepack picked up te dodies of their deceased and headded out.

♫§♥~Chile Panda the Great~♥§♫ said...

(Can Dreamer go after Rasho?)

Dreamer gazed after Rasho. She didn't want to believe that he stared this. It couldn't be possible.

Haku panted on his side. He could feel his legs at all. He was hardly breathing. He wouldn't be surprised if everyone thought he was dead.

(My status:
Haku~ Badly crippled, but will heal.
Dreamer~ Broken paw, missing three claws, torn ear.)

River said...

(Heres the injuries and dead of mine:

Melanie-Dead
Tajo-Dead
River-Nearly Dead/May Die SOON
Rasha-very badly wounds on neck, back and crimpled right hind leg(her strongest)
Soma-just a broken paw that will maime him. otherwise just a few bite marks(most of the time he jumps on from behind and snaps the other wolfs neck or back)
Kapu(i never really used him but here is what he got)-torn left shoulder, swollen right eye and very deep bite marks on his flank.
Imiq-Not much except for a nearly killing wound on her neck
Nisa-very badly bit in most parts. her left eye will never see again.)

☮Alina☯Bailey said...

Alison ran out and dragged Shenzi into the den Yeti was in and began to treat her.

♦♥Alado/Shade♥♦ said...

(Here's mine (I want to fit in ^_^):
Jade: Dead :(
Jazz: Broken heart, misses his sister
Hawk:Torn ear and injured flank, nothing to serious
Ginger: badly sprained paw
Frost: Serious injuries, lotsa blood
Evening: Possibly dead

Brookstep/Zebra/Shenzi said...

(Alison, if u notice she was up and fine. DO NOT interact with Shenzi!)

Shenzi limped to beside Kazrah, her one remaining eye wet with tears. She then turned to Saharah. "Saharah," she barked quietly, "You're the new alpha."

๑Warrior clans๑ said...

Wish fought through all the blood and fur trying to reach some of the wounded.

Zoraz/Dog Trainer In Training said...

((Dreamer can go after Rasho READ THIS AS YOU SWITCH THE MUSIC TO "ENCLOSURE"!))

Saharah choked and shook her head
".......I know......Rasho........." she whispered... She looked around the camp at all the wolves lying on the ground. Rain was pouring down and washing the blood away but the damage would never be forgotten. "Rasho.........." she whispered again.
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Rasho stood at the top of the cliff and stared into the camp with tears dripping slowly down his face.
"I don't belong here...If I hadn't fled none of this would have happened...and...and Kazrah would still be alive. I am my own. I never should have thought my Dark Side would allow any peace. Why did I think I could be able to live in peace and harmony??? WHY WAS I SO STUPID??" he yelled into the wind which swept away his words instantly. "Why was I so stupid.......?" he stood up straight and shook his wet fur a little. He swallowed the lump in his throat and binked away his tears.
"I'm a loner now. I'm never going to return.." with those words he turned and began to walk away into the darkness of the storm. Just before he dissapeared a flash of lightning came and showed him dissapearing into the bushes as they closed behind him... **Hopefully that was the end of the song**

Brookstep/Zebra/Shenzi said...

(Not even close to the end of the song, lol)

(r u going to do a new post saying the battles over, serious inguries and death, etc?)

Shenzi brushed against Saharah comfortingly, wishing everthing could truly alright again, but she knew it wouldnt. Maybe wolves' dead bodies were still scattered around the clearing, and others wer in need of desprate medical attention. Shenzi sighed.

☮Alina☯Bailey said...

Dekota Ran to Evening and brought her into the den where Yeti was, he then went out and got some herbs then came back to heal her.

(My wounds
Alison-Wounds on legs.
Dekota-nothing, he was in the den with the unable to fight.
Felicia-wounds on neck, legs, and sides.
Meli-Wounds on neck and sides.
Bailey-Wounds on sides and legs.
Dekota(Miraclepack, i shouldn't have had the same name)-Wounds on legs and chest.

i know no deaths, but i am pretty sure i have like the secont least wolves.)

River said...

Rasha's breath was starting to decrease as her soul was reluctantly leaving her body very slowly. River lay unconshus. Tajo lay dead his teeth still bared in a snarl and blood still pouring from his wounds. Melanie also lay unmoving. her spirit looking down on the horrifying scene(can she be born again in only as a pup?).
Soma, Kapu, Imiq and Nisa gathered around their kin whom all looked dead though River and Rasha where not. Imiq pushed her nose deep into her mothers fur and held it there. she closed her eyes. then she felt the slow beating heart still working. she jerked her head up and barked "SHE'S ALIVE!!!" with joy then quickly added "I need plantain, mint, yerbabwana, camamile, big sticky cobwebs and lots of big leaves!" to Nisa, Soma and Kapu. Soma for once obeyed and Nisa and Kapu had to race to keep up. when they came back Imiq quickly mixed the herbs and put them in her mothers mouth then rubbed her throght to make her swallow. then she toke the camamile and made it into pulp then smeared it on the softer side of the leaves(which where giant sycamore leaves that where still very green and tough) then wrapped/stuck them, soft side on her fur, on to her moms wounds. then she used the cobwebs to keep the leaves on. then she moved to Melanie to check if she was in fact really dead. she felt the body still warm but no heartbeat. she moved to Tajo. the same thing. finally though she had her doubts she moved to check on her mothers sister, River. she felt the slow but steady heartbeat. she requested for some mint and when Soma(yes SOMA not Nisa or Kapu) came back wiht the mint she rubbed then mist leaves still fresh and whole on the wounds and then put three large leaves into Rivers mouth and rubbed her throght to make her swallow.

♫§♥~Chile Panda the Great~♥§♫ said...

Dreamer glanced back quickly at the camp. She then quickly limped into the forest. As rain started to pour, she limped faster, hoping she wouldn't lose his scent."Rasho?" She called desperately, realizing she had feelings for him."Rasho?" She yelped louder. She began to run, even though her paw hurt like crazy. She then tripped on a root into the mud."Rasho!"

Zoraz/Dog Trainer In Training said...

Rasho turned at the sound of his name.
"..Dreamer..? What...What do you want? It's fine. I'm not going back. You don't have to worry. I'll never return again." he turned and started to walk away.

♫§♥~Chile Panda the Great~♥§♫ said...

"But why?" Dreamer struggled to get up and limped to him."It's not your fault! At least, I don't think so." Dreamers yellow eyes watered heavily. The rain plastered her fur to her wiry body.

(I'm listening to Evanesence while typing this.....)

Zoraz/Dog Trainer In Training said...

((I prefer Enclosure. I've taken a liking to it while I type sad stories... :] )
Rasho turned again.
"Don't you understand..? If I had faced battling that other pack Gazmuld wanted me to like a real wolf, I wouldn't have com ehere; causing Gazmuld to follow and kill....kill......kill Kazrah...and Mist....and everybody else.....I have to go! I can't stay here knowing I was the cause of this misery!!" his voice rose to a panicked yell as rain streamed into his eyes, making it hard to see if he was really crying.

Zoraz/Dog Trainer In Training said...

"Shenzi. back me up-" Saharah whispered as she limped past her, teeth clenched in a desperate effort not to cry out with pain.
"Ace, I belive you are now the leader of Talho pack? GETT OUTTA HERE! WE KILLED GAZMULD WE CAN KILL YOU TOO!" she roared. The wolves who had seen their leader fall had split up in to too groups. Those who were loyal and staying, and those who were going with Misty Pack. Saharah bared her teeth at Ace and snarled again.
"Rasho left. Find him yourself." she growled low in her throat and her eyes narrowed.

River said...

Sedona felt free at last from Gazmuld and wanted to stay with the wolves her own pack had harmed. Rover and Shina felt the same way but they knew that as long as an evil wolf ruled Talho Pack they would be needed to tame that fire.

Zalin who had a broken leg still faught with Soma(they had started before Melanie died and now they are finishing it) and pinned him down. he looked at her and growled "You want to mess with me furscrap?" then pushed forward with his powerful hind legs and sent her flying. he advanced to the place where she was hanging from a large pine branch and then leaping up tore her down onto a sharp rock. she barely could yelp after being the rock nearly piercing through her. Soma snarled with pleasure of the apertonity to kill this wolf. he was about to kill her when a large she-wolf bowled him over. "Soma that is no way to treat my sister and you know it! even if she did turn bad she is still my sister!" Soma was shocked to see this wolf. "Lisa! but the den! the fur! Emak! Emasko! Emask! they STOLE her and raised her evil then she came to Gazmulds pack which is now ruled by another set of evil wolves!" Lisa tossed her head and then growled "You want to kill her you are gona have to get through me!" to Nisa's(she was watching) surprise he lowered her head and growled annoyed "Fine." then stalked off his head held low, ears down and tail dragging. Imiq trotted to Lisa and barked "Ill help you heal the Couga' no problemo." then after a moment added "How did you do that to Soma?" Lisa grinned "Dontcha remember how he used to be Mister What-Ever-You-Want?" Imiq giggled and Nisa joined in and barked "Heck ya! but really it lasted this long? WOWZERS!" then they all turned to helping Zalin. after a while(ten human hours) all they could do was hope for the best(they had removed her from the rock also). then Imiq and Nisa trotted to Saharah with Lisa following. Kapu saw Lisa and caught up. he soon got the news of what happened and happily went with them to ask if Lisa could stay(ill put in the joining thingy also!). looking up at Saharah Imiq, Nisa and Kapu(though not planed) barked at the same time"Can Lisa stay? she was our best friend as pups before we came here!".

♫§♥~Chile Panda, who trains with Chuck Norris~♥§♫ said...

"Then I'm going with you!" Dreamer shouted back over the thunder. She didn't care about hiding her feelings anymore. She didn't want him to leave."I think it's cool how great you can fight! And ,aybe you did lead them to our pack, but it's what the ancestors wanted! It was time for all those wolves to return to the stars...." Dreamer couldn't continue, because she was crying.

Haku rasied his head slightly."Could someone help me up??" He managed to rasp, before flopping his head back on the ground.

Zoraz/Dog Trainer In Training said...

Rasho shook his head.
"No. You can't come." he barked firmly. He glanced up at the sky to see that, as instantly as it had started, the rain had stopped and the sky was clearing.
"Go back to Misty Pack, Dreamer........Tell Saharah I'm sorry for everything. I'll wait here. Don't tell her that I'm here and don't let anybody see you come back. ((((You can if you want)))) Go and return." he barked again, hopin ghe didn't sound to commanding.
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Saharah nodded at Kapu and Nisa.
"She can join." she barked. ***(((Make sure to remember about the whole story though. Saharah just told about everything and now they are healin gother wolves.)))***

River said...

(dont worry!)

Imiq and Nisa gave a yip of joy while Kapu howled with joy. then Lisa, Imiq and Nisa went to help Haku. Nisa toke orders and raced off to get the herbs. when she came back Imiq and Lisa worked together to help Haku.

Zoraz/Dog Trainer In Training said...

((kk.))

Zoraz/Dog Trainer In Training said...

Rasho suddenly whirled around from his place in the bushes.
"Why am I being such a coward?! I'll face Saharah like a real wolf. I'll say it to her face." he snarled at himself. He turned and ran towards the camp before he could change his mind. As he entered several wolves attempted to attack him but were instantly knocked down by Kira, Razor and Slice who were ordered to do so by Saharah.
"There will be no mre fighting! Orders from Saharah the Alpha herself!" growled Slice at a wolf who was glaring through tears and trying to free herself.
"HE KILLED KAZRAH! HE BROUGHT TALHO PACK HERE!!!" she bellowed and then stopped resisting and sobbed to herself, her head lowered. Rasho kept walking onwards and walked straight to Shenzi and Saharah.
"Saharah.......I was going to leave but decided to tell you this..I n-n-never meant..." he blinked furiously for a second before raising his head and standing more erect.
"I never meant for anywolves to be killed. Especialy Kazrah! I never should have run from Talho Pack. It was stupid of me. My Balck Side will never allow me to be in a pack. Never....I was born a loner and a loner I will always be!" he declared as he stared straight into Saharah's eyes. Saharah looked at Shenzi and then nodded understandingly.
"I never thought for a moment that you meant for any of this to happen of that you were to blame. Rasho..........come back to the pack......I......I want you to be the Beta......" she barked softly. Rasho looked taken aback as he took in her words.
"No. My Dark Side is a danger to all of the pack. I can't-"
"Rasho.........you can learn to control it....It's fine..!" Saharah interupted softly. She looked at Shenzi for support.

River said...

Soma snarled and lunged at Rasho in fury though he was grabbed by Lisa who caught him by the scruff and threw him up fairly high considering her being fairly small and him a large wolf. he landed on his feet and was about to try again when a stern look from Lisa stopped him in his tracks and he contented himself with threats.

Kapu looked simathetic to Rasho. he knew what it was like as an outcast. he had found out when he got lost and for a few months lived with another pack where he never fit in.

Imiq, Nisa and Lisa each looked at the black wolf in a difurent way. Imiq feeling mad but at the same time sad at/for him. Nisa held her head and ears high and her tail at 'im casual' place signaling she felt no hard feelings nor any soft feelings for him. Lisa feeling the feeling of being an outcast, traitor an outlaw like Rasho might feel(she likes him).

a brown pup came out of the bushes and trotted to the black wolf with head and ears held high, tail kind of up in an 'im cofident' place and not with the low down way a pup her age(ten minutes old) should. when she reached Rasho she barked "I forgive you!" then turn and raced out her tail held high as the only difurence in her entrance. soon she was to far to be tracked and she had crossed through the creeks, steams and a river where it was mellow many times and walked in them for a long time.

Zoraz/Dog Trainer In Training said...

Rasho Glanced around at Kapu, Nisa and the others. When the pup spoke he had been sure it would be an insult--but it wasn't. His eyes slightly widened but he said nothing. He watched Shenzi--waiting for a decition.

Brookstep/Zebra/Shenzi said...

Shenzi nodded slightly, silently, She paused for a moment, then barked. "Its good there'll be another beta. Im not longer a use the the pack like this..." she stared longily into space, thinking of the crushign sadness of having lost an eye.

Zoraz/Dog Trainer In Training said...

"Shenzi; you will never be out of this job if I can help it. Of course, you will be Alpha one day, but what I mean is; I'll never force you out! Rasho is just taking my old place. And Shenzi......you might be bale to see again...it is possible..................." (Your choice.)
--
Rasho looked thankful.
"I was going to leave- but I guess I kinda need to stay now, huh..?" he laughed softly and then turned to go help Shade--a loner who was helping Evening get herbs and leaves on her wounds.

Brookstep/Zebra/Shenzi said...

Shenzi shook her head. "I dont think its going to happen." she barked, trying to sound positve.

Zoraz/Dog Trainer In Training said...

Saharah snarled irritatedly at her friend suddenly; somethign she had never done before.
"JUST BELIEVE ME, OKAY!??!" she bellowed in Shenzi's face before whirling around and stomping off into the bushes on three legs. One thing about Saharah was that she had NEVER snarled at another wolf in the pack before. NEVER.

Brookstep/Zebra/Shenzi said...

Shenzi growled deep in her throat, and sat down down, tucking her tail next to her body. SHe began to think about her life, and relized something. She relized she hads little reason to live- half blind, and having lost so much that was important to her, wolves from her past before she joined the pack and now wolves had destroyed her current home.

Zoraz/Dog Trainer In Training said...

Saharah froze and sat down next to the bushes in the camp.
"Shenzi....I'm sorry. That just came out. I'm under a lot of stress right now. My beta lost an eye, many others lost and eye or a leg even, many are very hurt, lost others have been killed, others want revenge, I have to find out how I will feed my pack, I have a broken paw so I can't do much, I no longeer have to worry about threats towards Rasho as he can take care of himself, but now I have to worry about the pups. Some of them lost their mothers and not only one wolf can feed all of them. And now I am Alpha................and my closest friend, also my Beta........is depressed and angry at me. I can't continue like this. I need to stop and think for a moment. Many new wolves have joined and are not hurt......" she mused after she poured herself out at Shenzi's feet. She turned her head towards her freind and looked her in her good eye.
"Shenzi, you will always be my best friend. I'll never not be yours; you've always been there when I need it; been there for Kazrah when she needed it, now I'm here for you. Rest your eye. Keep the bandage on and see what happens. ((Duh, your choice)) and maybe......maybe you will get your sight back! But if you don't there isn't anything you can do about it. You may as well start to try and adjust to it now beforepaw..." she murmered sadly and quietly.

River said...

River,head down, tail dragging and ears pushed back, slowly walked out of camp to the forest.

Brookstep/Zebra/Shenzi said...

Shenzi lowered her head, tears streaming from her eye, and spoke softly in a near whisper. "Saharah, this has been so hard, on everyone. We all just need to stop and think for a while. Its just too hard for any one to think clearly, and I know i havent been the most tolerable wolf either. But I know that Ill always have one wolf that understands...." She drifted off, lost in emotion.

Zoraz/Dog Trainer In Training said...

Saharah nuzzled her friend for a moment before quietly and slowly whispering;
"Shenzi................I'm the Alpha...!" after a while she stood up and tried to take in everythign that had happened. She inhaled deeply and then turned towards the Rock.
"I'll send out a hunting party....." she murmured as she walked off.

Brookstep/Zebra/Shenzi said...

Shenzi nodded, and went to check on the wolves in the dens. SHe raced out of one den, and up to Saharah. She looked a bit shocked. "Its Yeti." she barked restlessly. "He's gotten worse."

Yeto lay on her makeshift nest, writhing in pain.

Zoraz/Dog Trainer In Training said...

Saharah had been at the top of the Rock and she turned and leapt off the rock from the top, forgetting and ignoring her hurt paw. She shot over to Yeti's den and looked at his face as he writhed in pain and uncomfort.
"Yeti..?....Yeti!?" she barked nervously as she stared at the wolf she loved.

☮Alina☯Bailey said...

Alison walked into the den with Yeti and Saharah with some herbs "You ok?" She barked to Saharah as she aplied some herbs to yeti's wounds. After finishing with yeti's wounds she refreshed his tea which was sitting next to him, in case he got healthy enough to drink it. "I see your paw is broken, i'll go get some herbs." Alison barked and went out of the den to get some herbs and a big leaf.
Once Alison got back into the den she tried to apply the herbs on Saharah's leg, then with the leaf around it to hold the pressure and keep the herbs there.
(Alison is like the treater for Yeti and The alpha [who'ever, Kazrah or Saharah.], she is usually the only one treating them besides Dekota and more resently some loners. is she/can she be the main/best Healer? BTW all of my wolves have some sort of medical training! so they can help too!)

☮Alina☯Bailey said...

Meli, Felicia, and Bailey walked into the den where Saharah and yeti were. they brought the elk into the den "We got a nice fat elk Saharah!" Meli barked.

Brookstep/Zebra/Shenzi said...

Shenzi poked her head inside the den, hearing many wolves, more than there should have been considering Yeti was the only hurt wolf in the den. SHe bared her teeth and Alison, Meli, Felicia, and Baily. "Get" she growled at them. "Can you not see that Yeti is beyond help, and right now, Saharah likely WONT CARE about elk?!?" SHe finishd with a snarl, and herded them out to work on wolves that realy needed help. She glanced at Saharah again before padding out herself, sitting at the entrance to give them more privacy.

Zoraz/Dog Trainer In Training said...

((((Whoa..! Are you going to kill him off...!?!! "Beyond help"?????!!))))))))))))
Saharah looked at Shenzi in desperation and fear.
"Shenzi....!....is....will he.......Shenzi! No!" she gasped as she shook her head in disbelieve. She looked at Yeti. "Yeti....." she whispered. ((Perfect timing for music. Enclosure is playing..)) tears slowly dripped down her face as she gazed at the hurt wolf....

River said...

(Zoraz Melanie is(im literly irl sobbing) dead)

Amoraq, Lisa, Rawhen, River, Rasha, Kapu, Nisa and Amy came in with the two deer they had gotten. they put them down and started to eat at the belly. Kadan, Kadoh, Soma and a few loners came to eat also.

Brookstep/Zebra/Shenzi said...

(I dont think Ill kill him off, but idk. Im just going with the flow, I guess.)

Shenzi was silent, but crying slightly.

Yeti was overcome by pure pain, his heart hammering as he felt a constant presance before relizing it was Saharah. HE tried to say her name, but couldnt.

Zoraz/Dog Trainer In Training said...

"Yeti.." Saharah barked suddenly. "If you die on me I'll kill you myself!!" she stood over him and then suddenly widened her eyes.
"Shenzi! Your oficially Alpha until my return! I remembered something my parents taught me a long time ago. I'll be back by," she glanced at the sun that was overhead. "when the shadows reach here," she pointed to a place the sun would hit in half an hour. "and I will return with some special roots and herbs. They are very hard to find unless you know what you're looking for. She whirled around and bolted into the trees as fast as she could on three legs.

Brookstep/Zebra/Shenzi said...

Shenzi looked after, curious, and keeping an eye on Yeti.

Zoraz/Dog Trainer In Training said...

******HALF AND HOUR LATER*******

(((((@Alina; oops! I meant to say this--
Saharah nodded thankfully at Alina and motioned for her to take it into the camp to be sahred. Then she turned back to Yeti with a worried look on her face))))))))))

Saharah dragged herself into the camp panting. She had the herbs and roots in her mouth though! She stumbled over towards Yeti and gently opened his mouth and placed the roots on his tongue. ((((Your choice whether they work or not...they're supossed to be rllllly powerful herbs that almost always heal *quickly* and ony few loners and other wolves know where to find them.)))))) Saharah waited with baited breath.

Brookstep/Zebra/Shenzi said...

After a few minutes, Yeti's heat rate slowed and he coughed heavily. regaining consoicness.

Zoraz/Dog Trainer In Training said...

Saharah let out a howl of relief as Yeti caughed.
"He's alive! He's goign to live..! MY MATE IS ALIVE!!!!!!" she howled loudly to the sky.

Brookstep/Zebra/Shenzi said...

Yeti groaned slightly, opening an eye and looking up at Saharah. His vision swam, but he could make out her form above him. His ears rang.

Zoraz/Dog Trainer In Training said...

"Yeti...oh Yeti!" Saharah barked as she buried her face in his soft fur. She recoiled instantly as she saw how badly he was injured and how close to death he had come. She observed his terrible injuries in a horrified silence.

Brookstep/Zebra/Shenzi said...

"Sa----harah..." Yeti bark softly, calming,

Zoraz/Dog Trainer In Training said...

"Yes. It's me. It's okay, Yeti. You'll be fine now." she hushed him softly.

Brookstep/Zebra/Shenzi said...

"What.....ahppened....?" Yei asked slowly.

Zoraz/Dog Trainer In Training said...

Saharah sighed and sat down and started the whole story starting from a short while after he was carried to the den before the fight. She told the whole thing trying not to cry. She was pretty sure he hadn't seen all of it even if he had heard it so she told everything. (((((Did you know Ace is still standing there.....? What happened to him...?))))) she finished with her returning from getting the roots and herbs and putting them in his mouth. She gazed at his face and then met his eyes.

Brookstep/Zebra/Shenzi said...

(Yeah, im getting to them. They slunk out)

Yeti looked her in the eyes. "Thank you." his words were simple, but took up a deeper meaning,

Zoraz/Dog Trainer In Training said...

Saharah understood and she nodded and smiled.
"Rest now," she murmured before backing out and motioning Shenzi to follow.

Brookstep/Zebra/Shenzi said...

Shenzi stood up, fallowing Saharah.

Zoraz/Dog Trainer In Training said...

Saharah walked out and watched the wolves walking around andhelping put herbs on the hurt wolves.
"How is your eye, Shenzi..?" she asked after a moment.

Brookstep/Zebra/Shenzi said...

Shenzi lowered her ears, as if accepting defeat. "Its not going to get better." she barked finnaly.

Zoraz/Dog Trainer In Training said...

"If you expect and accept defeat, Shenzi....that's what you'll always get..." Saharah murmured.

Brookstep/Zebra/Shenzi said...

"Ive beem told its not going to get better." she barked sadley.

River said...

a grey she-wolf came to Shenzi having heard her saying she will never see from her eye again barked "If you set your heart to something then ANYTHING(IRL this is true) is possible. dont give up hope!(its still your choice if she does or does not see from that eye again Shenzi)" then smiled and added "By the way im Amy." then trotted off.

Zoraz/Dog Trainer In Training said...

(not ANYTHING, but a lot of things...)
Saharah looked at the ground and nodded her head.
"I'm sorry......" she whispered.
(I think we're kinda done here.....)